Teto Append Fanart

anatomy, anatomy, anatomy.

In general you have to improve all but some clues:

Legs seems you are looking them from the back not from the front.

Arms too short, body short, breat too high, hands and food.

about colours too much gray used for the shadowns try to use colours for them, also, the back ground, it's better use a plain colour than a degradation.

Shadonws of the hair have to look more natural or more plain. Try to play with the brush oppacity.

Skyn colour too much gray, use a pastel yellow or a pastel orange

By other way there is too much blank, Try to cover all twith the draw, never leave blanks if you want to make an ilustration.

brisgt on the foots are white? it's look they are shiny! never use with for skin light.

And ofcourse, if you are working with the mouse, try to work with vectors, they will help ypu a ton to make the right lines.

I hope this could help you to improve ^^

gotta say if u did that freehand with a mouse ur pretty good! however might i suggest, since u probably used PS, draw on paper>scan to PS and create a lineart~ im sure it'd look heaps better