Sunset Nanoha Fanart

Did this over my winter break as a Christmas present for a friend. I did this in Prismacolor colored pencils on sketchbook paper, originally 11" by 14". When working on this, I remembered why I'd switched to using Bristol board in the past. . . I kind of attack and saturate the paper, and when thinner papers get that sort of abuse they start to curl in on themselves. A lot. As in, the lower right corner nearly touched the jewel in the center of her skirt by the time I was done.

So, any critiques? I do know I put Raising Heart too close to the edge of the paper--forgot to account for the perforation when I drew it. ^^;